The second one was subtler but still caused me to trip while reading. The sentence read, “…when seen from this standpoint of view.” Not a big deal right? It stopped me. Would it have stopped you?
Then there was this one. “This is the solution we strongly suggest you go with.” Would you have let this ride or would you, as I did, have to mentally rewrite in order to move on: “This is the solution we recommend.”
* I think this writer has referenced and combined three concepts. The golden candy bar which entitles the bearer to inherit Willy Wonka’s factory, the E-Ticket required to ride the best rides at Disneyland way back when (before your time Jon) and the silver bullet that is the one sure way to stop a vampire.Posted by BJ